读了,禁不住提意见,好意哈
*included wood or bamboo stand
(Is this right or it should be: wooden or bamboo stand included; including wooden or bamboon stand我也不确定)
*wi-fi or 3G
Is wi-fi supposed to be all capitalized also?
*Stopper that prevents
(consistency, should it be "Stopper preventing ..." 前面都没有用THAT)
*Each case ... is hand finished and sanded
Each case ... is hand sanded and finished ... (sanded first)
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*后面两条没必要,要拿出来才能按,充电,谁买呀?
要不就合1起说