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ZT: 当海归未遂之后、、、 -- wanderer - (5102 Byte) 2003-11-11 周二, 07:42 (1418 reads) |
阿基里斯 [博客] [个人文集]


头衔: 海归中将 声望: 教授 性别:  加入时间: 2004/02/22 文章: 3846 来自: from Aegean Sea to Pacific Ocean 海归分: 754343
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作者:阿基里斯 在 海归商务 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
Verbal Section - Senetence Correction
============================ I assume you know the rules, let me know if you don't and I'll give you the official instructions ============================
OK, let's have some fun, and see what score you're getting in GMAT 
---I'll post the answers (my answers) tomorrow.
1. I want to sincerely thank you for your employment offer for the position in XYZ, Inc. in Shanghai and I greatly appreciate this opportunity. (a) your employment offer for the position in XYZ, Inc. in Shanghai and I (b) offering me the position within XYZ, Inc. in Shanghai; and I (c) your offering me the position in XYZ, Inc. in Shanghai and in addition (d) employing offer in the position within XYZ, Inc. in Shanghai; and I (e) you employing offer in the position within XYZ, Inc. of Shanghai and I
2. I valued our discussion about the position responsibilities, as well as the career possibilities within XYZ, Inc. in Shanghai, however, after my serious consideration about my career plan, I think that this position currently might not be a close match to me. (a) in Shanghai, however, after my serious consideration about my career plan, I think that (b) at Shanghai; however, with my serious considerations about my career plan, I think that (c) of Shanghai, nevertheless, after seriously considering my career plan, I think (d) in Shanghai; however, after considering my career plan seriously, I think that (e) of Shanghai, however, after the serious considerations about my career plan, I think
3. With my deep regret, I am respectfully withdrawing from consideration. However, this position is truely a good opportunity for me, and I just feel some work experience in North America will be more helpful for my career goal even though the current job market is not great as you know. (a) With my deep regret, I am respectfully withdrawing from consideration. However, this position is truely a good opportunity for me, and I just feel some work experience in North America will be more helpful for my career goal even though the current job market is not great as you know. (b) With my deepest regret, I am respectfully withdrawing my consideration. However, this position is a truely good opportunity for me, and I just feel some work experience in North America will be more helpful for my career goal even though the current job market is not great as you know. (c) With my deepest regret, I am respectfully withdrawing myself from your consideration. However, this position is truely a good opportunity for me, and I just feel the more work experience in North America will be more helpful for my career goal, in spite of the fact that the current job market is not great. (d) With my deep regret, I am respectfully withdrawing from consideration. However, this position is a truely good opportunity for me, and I just feel some work experience in North America will be more helpful for my career goal, even though the current job market is not great, as you know. (e) With my deepest regret, I am respectfully withdrawing myself from your consideration. However, this position is a truely good opportunity for me, and I just feel that the more work experience in North America the more helpful for my career goal, despite the fact that the current job market is not great.
4. Again, thank you for your time and consideration, providing the opportunity to interview with you, discussing career possibilities and learning about the work of your team. (a) your time and consideration, providing the opportunity to interview with you, discussing career possibilities and learning about the work of your team (b) taking your time, considering my application, providing me with the opportunity of interview, and allowing me to discuss career possibilities of working in your team. (c) your time, your consideration of my application, providing me with the opportunity of interview, discussing career possibilities of working in your team. (d) your time and considering my application, providing the opportunity of interview, discussing career possibilities and learning about work of your team. (e) taking your time, considering my application, providing me with the opportunity of interview, discussing career possibilities and learning about work of your team.
5. I do not like at the last minute you tell me this decision. (a) at the last minute you tell me this decision. (b) the last-minute decision you just told me. (c) the last-minute decision when you just told me. (d) that at the last minute when you tell me this decision. (e) the fact that at the last minute when you're telling me this decision.
6. We waste a lot of time. (a) We waste a lot of time. (b) We waste lots of time. (c) We waste a lot of times. (d) We waste lots of times. (e) We waste huge amount of time.
7. So from this point, you will not get any opportunity in the future with us, no matter when you come back China. Also, frankly speaking, I never think any person with a few more years experience in US will add obvious value to us when joining our team. (a) So from this point, you will not get any opportunity in the future with us, no matter when you come back China. Also, frankly speaking, I never think any person with a few more years experience in US will add obvious value to us when joining our team. (b) So from this point onwards, you will not get any opportunity in the future with us, no matter when you come back China. Also, frankly speaking, I never think any person with a few more years experience in US would add obvious value to us when joining our team. (c) So from this point on, you will not get any opportunity in the future from us, no matter when you come back China. Also, frankly speaking, I never think any person with a few more years experience in US must add obvious value to us when joining our team. (d) So from this point onwards, you will not get any opportunity in the future from us, no matter when you come back to China. Also, frankly speaking, I never think any person with a few more years experience in US would add obvious value to us when joining our team. (e) So from this point on, you will not get any opportunity in the future with us, no matter when you come back to China. Also, frankly speaking, I never think any person with a few more years experience in US must add obvious value to us when joining our team.
8. We are doing quite special stuffs in the world, and we mostly will build up people only by our own ways. Inside our team, a lot of international exposures, and some of international rotation opportunities. This will be only applicable for team members. You can not get this kind of value if you only take some employment in some US local company. (a) We are doing quite special stuffs in the world, and we mostly will build up people only by our own ways. Inside our team, a lot of international exposures, and some of international rotation opportunities. This will be only applicable for team members. (b) We are doing some quite special stuff in the world, and we mostly will build up our team in our own way. Inside our team, there will be a lot of international exposures and some international rotation opportunities. The opportunities will be only applicable to our team members. (c) We are doing quite special stuffs in the world, and we mostly will build up people only in our own ways. Inside our team, there will be a lot of international exposures and some international rotation opportunities. This will be only applicable for our team members. (d) We are doing some quite special stuff in the world, and we mostly will build up our team in our own way. Inside our team, there will be a lot of international exposures and some international rotation opportunities. They will be only applicable to our team members. (e) We are doing quite special stuff in the world, and we mostly will build up people by our own way. Inside our team, there will be a lot of international exposures and some international rotation opportunities. They will be only applicable for our team members.
9. That is also the reason why many years ago I immediately come back China after got my overseas degree, but some of my classmates if right now they come back, they need to work for me. (a) That is also the reason why many years ago I immediately come back China after got my overseas degree, but some of my classmates if right now they come back, they need to work for me. (b) That is also the reason why I immediately came back China many years ago after getting my overseas degree; but if some of my classmates come back right now, they need to work for me. (c) That is also the reason why I immediately come back to China many years ago after I got my overseas degree, but some of my classmates if coming back right now, they need to work for me. (d) That is also the reason why many years ago I immediately came back to China after I got my overseas degree, but some of my classmates comeing back right now, they need to work for me. (e) That is also the reason why many years ago I immediately came back to China after getting my overseas degree, --- some of my classmates coming back right now would have to work for me.
10. No reason because they stay in overseas longer so that they need to get higher position. You may take Taiwan's history to study what is the conclusion for those overseas returnees. (a) No reason because they stay in overseas longer so that they need to get higher position. (b) It's no reason because they stay overseas longer so that they need to get higher position. (c) It's not a strong reason that they stay in overseas longer so that they deserve to get higher position. (d) It's not a fact that they stay overseas longer so they are entitled to a higher position. (e) It's not a fact that because they stay in overseas longer then they are entitled to get a higher position.
作者:阿基里斯 在 海归商务 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
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ZT: 当海归未遂之后、、、 -- wanderer - (5102 Byte) 2003-11-11 周二, 07:42 (1418 reads) - Just for fun, I turned these two letters into GMAT -- 阿基里斯 - (21034 Byte) 2003-11-11 周二, 14:02 (496 reads)
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